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we love like we sin, terrified and breathless.

we are tea-at-midnight girls, naming constellations
that don't exist after lost tourists we meet on the
street, reminding our freckle covered shoulders
that even beautiful things can be made ordinary.

we are broken fingers and half-closed eyelids and a
penchant for mischief. we are ribbon skin and frantic
desires and incandescent hope. we are a voice spilling
secrets to falling leaves diving after their arachnid brothers,

mimicking the millions before us who were
judged unfairly, unjustly but all too correctly.

we whisper promises to dandelions because they do not
know how to hold grudges and we refuse to die because
the world can not stand the sight of our scars and
cloud-colored eyes filled with a malady called freedom.

we are believers and dreamers and scared to death but we
are not done yet. we are dusty library windows and thunder
raking through bones and leaving eyes glowing, skin shaking,
burning whispers of 'I'm sorry, but this is me. This is just

me.'

we are not victims, we are survivors,

and you'll be praying for death by tomorrow morning.
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Author's Comments

full title: and we found that, together, we could never breathe

edit:

Thank you everybody for the favorites and the comments! I'm honored and pleased to have gotten a DD. I never thought my writing would really touch someone but it seems like I was wrong. Again, thank you so much.

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-09-14

A truly imaginative offering, ~SmileforSomeone's and we found... easily takes what seems ordinary and turns it into something quite extraordinary. (Suggested by *Gir-Gir and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:iconcookymonstah:
took my breath away. :heart:

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hugs and cookies. <3
:hug:
:iconrachel-rhapsody:
this is amazing.
honestly.
beautiful.

we are tea-at-midnight girls, naming constellations
that don't exist after lost tourists we meet on the
street, reminding our freckle covered shoulders
that even beautiful things can be made ordinary.

=
:heart:

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you have lemon rind eyes

^project-improve
:iconsameoldsongs:
We are not victims, we are survivors

One of the most beautiful things I've read. Just excellent :)


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"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world"

-Oscar Wilde
:iconryanxcole:
Gorgeous (:

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.i want a lover i don't have to love

i want a girl who's too sad to give a fuck.
:iconalkitty311:
Absolutely and utterly amazing. Beautifully written. :heart:

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~People are like slinkies, basically useless and yet its so fun to watch them fall down the stairs ~

~Every artist dips his brush in his own soul, and paints his own nature into his pictures~
:iconcaptainsunflower:
hot damn!
this made my heart jump into the sky!
thank you for spilling the words we all want to say here in the land of the truley living!

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If God controls the land and disease,
and keeps a watchful eye on me,
if he's really so damn mighty,
well my problem is that I can't see,
well who'd wanna be? Who'd wanna be such a control freak?
:iconsuddenlyautumn:
this is excellent! i love the imagery

--
e quindi uscimmo a reveder le stelle
- thence we emerged to see again the stars
:iconhelzcullen:
burning whispers of 'I'm sorry, but this is me. This is just

me.'

we are not victims, we are survivors,

and you'll be praying for death by tomorrow morning.

particularly stunned me, however the whole piece made me stop in my tracks and forget to breathe.

:heart:
Lovely.

--
listlessheartssignhere.

♥?
:iconmaimtorturekill:
first literature DD that's made me say 'hmm.'

good shit.

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.metal.

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